Captive bonus chapter: page 14-16
Added 2024-03-26 09:54:40 +0000 UTCI hope you'll enjoy this update! I had a lot of fun with Miguel and Gabriel!! My beta reader, Jules, made a pun out of one of my typo and we thought it'd be fun to keep it hehe!
And Momfdzro helped with the spanish parts :)
I am sick since yesterday night, so I will take some time off to heal and recover ๐
Comments
These pages are SO funny!! Also Peter wearing Miguel's stuff............ screams into a pillow
jules
2024-03-29 03:20:59 +0000 UTCGabriel is so fun!! I wanna try out empanadas, they look tasty and comforting! thanks <3 I'm doing better now <3
yakichou
2024-03-28 09:58:17 +0000 UTCthey're cute boyfriends <3 thanks! I am way better now :)
yakichou
2024-03-28 09:57:27 +0000 UTCthank you! I love chaotic baby brother energy haha! I am doing way better now! Thank you <3
yakichou
2024-03-28 09:56:57 +0000 UTCthank you! I had fun with brainstorming their clothes :) I am glad this update was a fun one! I had a lot of fun with it!
yakichou
2024-03-28 09:56:24 +0000 UTCthat's their dynamic haha! I thought that was cute and funny if Miguel would be weak for Gabriel's puppy eye for a long time (I'm sure it still work on him time to time)
yakichou
2024-03-28 09:55:42 +0000 UTCI really wanted Peter to have Miggy's clothes and this outfit was a nice easter egg! :)
yakichou
2024-03-28 09:54:31 +0000 UTCI was so excited to figure out what kind of dynamic I wanted to write about them! I imagine Miguel being very weak with Gabriel's puppy face. He was his first baby (I think they have a good age gap that allow them to have this strong big brother/ little brother connection)! Yess! The kids wanted to tease Peter so badly but they got stopped haha! Pavitr wanted details and he got nothing, poor bean! I am very happy you like this update!
yakichou
2024-03-28 09:53:39 +0000 UTC๐ธ๐ธ๐ธ get well soon, ChouChou!
Brookie
2024-03-27 06:18:45 +0000 UTCGreat chapter, omg Gabriel is a mood ๐ Hope you start feeling better here soon, mate! Also now I want empanadas.. imma make some
Oddii
2024-03-26 22:02:34 +0000 UTCPeter & Miguel walking in hand-in-hand with Peter wearing Miguelโs oversized shirt is SO CUTE ๐ฅน get well soon Chou! ๐ซ๐
Lemon Mango!
2024-03-26 21:11:56 +0000 UTCSo cute! ๐ญ great work as always!
Bishie
2024-03-26 18:10:25 +0000 UTCGabriel is such a mess! I love him lol And I hope you get better soon!
Hallokatzchen
2024-03-26 14:05:59 +0000 UTCI love their clothes so much๐ซถ๐ปโค๏ธ the puns and the sibling energy is just so good๐ Miguel is just๐คโจ
MC
2024-03-26 12:28:56 +0000 UTCAH I DIDN'T NOTICE YOU MENTIONED ME THANK YOU SM??? ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
Momfdzro
2024-03-26 12:26:12 +0000 UTC"Grab-riel" is amazing ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ I love the sibling dynamic, and I love that Peter and Meegle walk in holding hands. ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ
Momfdzro
2024-03-26 12:23:32 +0000 UTCPanel 1 is giving major โSomeone will dieโฆโ โ of fun ๐โ vibes. Also migs really? That still worked when you were 20
Lesbian Mothman
2024-03-26 10:21:22 +0000 UTC๐ฅฐ
Xetami
2024-03-26 10:07:17 +0000 UTCPeter in his oversized shirt โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ and Gabri is too cute ๐ฅบ
Soojin K
2024-03-26 10:04:08 +0000 UTCOh I love the brothers so muchhhhh! Gabriel would try to puppy dog face Miguel ๐คฃ๐คฃ also the kids just being like โoh hey Peter!โ They definitely had bets about whether or not they were dating ๐คฃ as usual, so sweet, so cute, love them all so much wanna squish their cheeksssss! โจ๐ซถ๐ป๐ฉต
Rex
2024-03-26 09:57:27 +0000 UTCMiguel is so petty i love it XD
Drajk
2024-03-26 09:56:45 +0000 UTC
