TKES CHapter 2.100 Finished
Added 2022-01-13 02:06:49 +0000 UTCHave fun peeps <3
I was also suggested to make the new story (plant girl) Third person view. Toughts?
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what are your thoughts on the 3rd person version of the prologue so far? It's still very rough but just checking
Faragi
2022-01-16 04:17:25 +0000 UTCFirst person with third person narrator was the idea. Ive been told it works better for the stories I want to tell
Faragi
2022-01-14 07:31:29 +0000 UTCThird person works well if your going to have a lot of characters interacting as opposed to one character or just a couple for extended periods. At least that's my view on it but I have found I tend towards 3rd person or 1st person with a 3rd person narrator. I tried 1st person for a rough draft where the mc knew nothing and every discovery was shared with the readers that way which worked it made the character seem vulnerable and isolated when every interaction was filtered through her point of view .
Will C
2022-01-13 11:16:06 +0000 UTC